[Oswald2001]

She found out that these are not the kind of people that you want to try and play.


At least she'll know from now on.

[chewbacca]

Lol twisted little childrens story you spun there Vedderman

[braden24]

Originally Posted by Vedderman ↗

This 32-year old piece of cannon-fodder in tight pants was a known drug user who was dating a drug trafficker and ran around in drug circles far more than is healthy in urban Brazil.

Last night, around 9:00, she received a phone call at her parents' house that excitedly informed her that a big parcel of cash was being delivered for her at the bus terminal down the street. Ecstatic at her remarkable fortune, she told her parents that Easy Street was on the horizon and put on her best platform sandals to haul that tight little ass to the bus stop.

What transpired there will forever be unknown to scholars and fools alike, but we can all probably assume that the ship she was hoping for did not come in. Whether or not she met with and received money from someone at the bus stop, the fact is that she turned around and began the walk home only moments after arriving.

Unfortunately for her, it would appear that the phone call and associated jaunt to the mass transit hub was only a clever ruse to lure her out of the house for nefarious purposes. Halfway home she blundered headlong into a an ambuscade so clever and unpredictable that Sun Tzu himself would surely have been flummoxed. Armed men converged upon her from an adjacent alley, brandishing firearms and ill intent.

Witness statements provided by a passing car said that the girl looked surprised and horrified to see men approaching her. They were clearly unexpected. She turned to run, but the bullets were quicker. She took one shot in the shoulder and another in the side of the face as she spun, then dropped to the concrete and died on her back. Death was probably almost instant due to the headshot.

No one is particularly certain who set her up or why. If there was money (unlikely), it was not on the scene when the cops arrived. Was it the dirty drug-dealing beau? One of his enemies? One of hers? Who can say. Not especially likely that they'll be putting a crack team of coppers on it to find out, either.

Anyway, here she is, dead in the street with a bullet to the head and another to the shoulder, fired from point blank range.

Thanks, as is often the case, to esteemed contributor Etsu, who graciously alerted me to the case and contributed some of the images.

This gentleman provides the most incredible narratives I have ever read. I wish you were my kids English/creative writing teacher....Thanks so much! I so appreciate it - best flat out...

[cortdb]

Originally Posted by kellyhound ↗

They're so easy to bamboozle if you lure them with money lol

that is a fact kelly. ( not that i have any experience, Or money)

[Vedderman]

Originally Posted by cortdb ↗

that is a fact kelly. ( not that i have any experience, Or money)
But you are the first woman i have ever seen that stated that.

KellyHOUND is male.

[cortdb]

Originally Posted by Vedderman ↗

KellyHOUND is male.

lol well i didnt know
if thats the case i apologize and edited post. I never knew. hhahahah embarrassing

[tootsieflowrslave]

I'd say something in my own words about your narration, but I think everyone else here has pretty much captured my assessment of your writing style. Cheers from Catlett, Va USA.

[tootsieflowrslave]

Originally Posted by Vedderman ↗

KellyHOUND is male.

All these years, and I just found out....I'm going to go hide in my corner now and mourn for my loss of blissful ignorance.

[Vedderman]

Originally Posted by tootsieflowrslave ↗

All these years, and I just found out....I'm going to go hide in my corner now and mourn for my loss of blissful ignorance.

You might be confused. There was also a mod named KELLY, who is female. I guess she's technically still a Mod, too, but she only logs in about twice a year so you may have confused Kelly and Kellyhound. Oddly common mistake.

[AceGoober]

Vedderman, you are a master at posting entertaining titles and post body content my eyes have ever had the pleasure of reading. This one in particular is one of your best works. Thank you.

And, XybertroniX, you made me totally with the last sentence in your post. Thank you! I needed that.

Originally Posted by XybertroniX ↗

a narrative, informative and vivid post only vedderman delivers. just dont scrounge your head trying to dig it if youre having difficulty or your going to need one big laxative.