[chris]

Originally Posted by AnalSimms ↗

If I were to recommend anything content-wise it would be to try and sneak in some hints of their surroundings and perhaps add a little more texture to their physical descriptions. Little details like having a sore knee or a cute mole on her temple... that sort of thing.

Okay, sounds good. Thanks

[Analcuck]

Are you planning on incorporating this into a larger body of work? Have you outlined it? I've always wanted to do a story with a psychopath, but I have an imagination so dark I feel I'd go too far... apparently there is a such thing.