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09-02-2018, 07:25 AM
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Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
On 27th August 2018, 'F' was beaten to death by an angry mob in Osun state, Nigeria. 'F' was travelling in a car with 2 friends, they were all drunk & high on drugs. 'F' accidently knocked down a pedestrian. Witnesses who saw the incident chased after the car. During the chase, 'F' ran over 4 other people. All 5 victims died at the scene. While his 2 friends fled the scene, 'F' was lynched. He was dragged out of his car & beaten to death. *Thanks again to Dahlia_Neda for her help*       |
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09-02-2018, 07:33 AM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
No problem. Though for an author, your write-ups are shit! Muhaha!
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09-02-2018, 07:37 AM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
The translations might be a little ropey, I try to make as much sense as I can.  Damn it Jim, I'm a writer, not a linguist! (Yes, that was a Star Trek reference  ).
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09-02-2018, 07:49 AM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
Your wording + layout are the problem. Edit: Better here, but the place name needs putting in: On 27th August 2018, 'F' was beaten to death by an angry mob. 'F' was travelling in a car with 2 friends, they were all drunk + high on drugs. 'F' accidently knocked down a pedestrian. Witnesses who saw the incident, chased after the car. During the chase, 'F' ran over 4 other people. All 5 victims died at the scene. While his 2 friends fled the scene, 'F' was lynched. He was dragged out of his car + beaten to death.
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09-02-2018, 08:32 AM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
I think that's the first time you've said 'cheers' to me in a decade! Edit: Actually, the comma doesn't belong here: Witnesses who saw the incident, chased after the car.
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09-02-2018, 09:08 AM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
"Sweetums"! Pet names + terms of endearment weren't our thing, you weirdo.
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09-02-2018, 06:14 PM
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Re: Man Beaten to Death by Mob in Nigeria
When you said knocked down...I was like whew, no one died. And then added all 5, including knocked down pedestrian died...  Was he the driver? |
