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Toby be nimble, Toby be quick, Toby just jacked your TV bitch.
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Toby be nimble, Toby be quick, Toby just jacked your TV bitch.
Gawd!! I love that!
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So damp beneath the earth

So glittering behind the dream
You sense yellow ghosts before the slime
Tighten up your wig! The demon was hard
Sinful and mammoth beneath the sea
You hobnob with numb gems near the water
Be aware! The demon will come
So damp beneath the earth
You smear quaking tomb stones against the towers
Be transparent. The demon is over
open-eyed hungry
crossing the frontier
a ticking clock
Where in the end
my friend
stop for a while
trying to remember.
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Ballad of a Dying Love

It's in her eyes, the way she cries,
When all of the hope is gone.
Reviewing her futures past life,
The memories linger on.

A stinging thrust into the bust,
Is bleeding her heart dry.
The faults are mine, blades turn to rust,
Perfection's passed us by.

So much has changed, life's rearranged.
How do I fix this now?
It seems that all attempts are vain,
Rain pours, though not from clouds.

With unseen lows, a spectrum glows,
No light beyond the dark.
How does one cure a fatal blow,
When clumsy is the art?

Two souls entwined in thorns and vines,
Each move tears us apart.
The darkness dies when light can shine,
Too late for broken hearts.

Expense the price, my only vice,
A cost from breathe within.
Awakening lions from mice,
Blinds good, this mask of sin.

Forgive me not, I wrote the plot,
A tragic means to end.
As I do rest upon this cot,
I wish your heart to mend.

It seems to me, malignancy,
Could cease in its existence.
If only I could magically,
Erase myself this instant.
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Ballad of a Dying Love

It's in her eyes, the way she cries,
When all of the hope is gone.
Reviewing her futures past life,
The memories linger on.

A stinging thrust into the bust,
Is bleeding her heart dry.
The faults are mine, blades turn to rust,
Perfection's passed us by.

So much has changed, life's rearranged.
How do I fix this now?
It seems that all attempts are vain,
Rain pours, though not from clouds.

With unseen lows, a spectrum glows,
No light beyond the dark.
How does one cure a fatal blow,
When clumsy is the art?

Two souls entwined in thorns and vines,
Each move tears us apart.
The darkness dies when light can shine,
Too late for broken hearts.

Expense the price, my only vice,
A cost from breathe within.
Awakening lions from mice,
Blinds good, this mask of sin.

Forgive me not, I wrote the plot,
A tragic means to end.
As I do rest upon this cot,
I wish your heart to mend.

It seems to me, malignancy,
Could cease in its existence.
If only I could magically,
Erase myself this instant.
I like this.
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There once was a man from Nantucket
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There once was a man from Nantucket
Whose dick was so long he could suck it.
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I believe it's "Whose"
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I believe it's "Whose"
Well fuck. I'll edit that. Thanks.
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