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Creative Writing/Poetry Corner

I thought that since there are a lot of people here that enjoy the literary arts that this could be a place to post them. I know the lot of you will attempt to derail this thread but I will be serious in posting my works.

I recently found my stash of poetry I wrote when I was younger and will post the majority of them here. I would also love to read others poetry/stories and method of writing (be it iambic pentameter or simply haiku.)
Post only origional works please.
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Crossing into the eerie fog,
With the fear that I must bear
I make my move, but feel a tug
Looking back, no-one's there
And as I continue on,
the lights above seem so sweet
I feel the heat of a million suns
Painting my defeat.
Into that night, I wont calmly go
Because my will is strong
So tonight, you will finally know
I fought the battle that someone else won.
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Re: Creative Writing/Poetry Corner

Shakey is a fucking cunt

to lighten the display of kimos

The nightmarish poodles all looking quite gaunt

I broke the fucking window.
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Crossing into the eerie fog,
With the fear that I must bear
I make my move, but feel a tug
Looking back, no-one's there
And as I continue on,
the lights above seem so sweet
I feel the heat of a million suns
Painting my defeat.
Into that night, I wont calmly go
Because my will is strong
So tonight, you will finally know
I fought the battle that someone else won.


Crossing into eerie fog,
With fear that I must bear
I make my move, but feel a tug
Look back but no-one's there.

And as I continue on,
the lights above seem sweet
The burning of a million suns
Keeps painting my defeat.

Into the night, won't calmly go
Because my will is strong
So tonight, you'll finally know
The battle other's won.

I enjoyed it and I know criticism hurts. But I honestly liked it.
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Do you like Emily Dickinson.

My favorite of hers is a short one because I figured out the play on words regarding "love"

It's about friends

Alter? When the hills do.
Falter? When the sun
Question if his glory
Be the perfect one.

Surfeit? When the daffodil
Doth of the dew:
Even as herself, O friend!
I will of you!
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No this isn't a thread about your attempts at getting laid.
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Thats one i just made up . I'll post my real ones when i get my binder out tomorrow. Damn it feels good to write again.
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Do you like Emily Dickinson.

My favorite of hers is a short one because I figured out the play on words regarding "love"

It's about friends

Alter? When the hills do.
Falter? When the sun
Question if his glory
Be the perfect one.

Surfeit? When the daffodil
Doth of the dew:
Even as herself, O friend!
I will of you!
Yes i do. I like a lot of early works. Too bad a lot of them only found greatness after death.
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Do you like Emily Dickinson.

My favorite of hers is a short one because I figured out the play on words regarding "love"

It's about friends

Alter? When the hills do.
Falter? When the sun
Question if his glory
Be the perfect one.

Surfeit? When the daffodil
Doth of the dew:
Even as herself, O friend!
I will of you!
The one she had about suicide is tight as well!
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The one she had about suicide is tight as well!
Now I have to look it up. I am almost sure I remember it.


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